Looking forward to more. This seems like quite the beginning and I wonder where you are going with this. Sia and master sid are the main characters? Is he a janitor too? Why are the dates so different? If she traveled and hasn’t met Sid yet why does the synopsis say she learned from him? I hope the next couple chapters reveal the answers to those.
it's not bad, I would say, but it honestly feels like the fantasy of an 8th grader, he's this normal guy until whoa he wakes up with powers and then he goes and wins against his bullies and he just hurts all the people who try and bully him. If that's your cup of tea, go for it. Otherwise, just look away.
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